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为无梦徽州——逝去的繁华配诗

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                                                              为无梦徽州——逝去的繁华配诗

                                                                                                      作者 ;时尚老太
             既然和铁手签了无纸合同,那这诗就得继续写下去,即使没有承诺,谁看了铁手的图片,那么惨淡,那么凄凉,都会有用诗表达的愿望。用诗述说这种生活,用诗述说这种状态。
                                                                             为无梦徽州——逝去的繁华配诗

                                                                                                    (一)

                                                                                                   铁手啊,
                                                                                                你咋这样啊,
                                                                                             美丽的相机墨砚,
                                                                                              那伤感无极纸笺。
                                                                                                        看了,
                                                                                                   你的作品,
                                                                                                   泪流的满脸,
                                                                                                        那,
                                                                                                  方格木楼,
                                                                                                虽然告知颓败,
                                                                                                      依稀,
                                                                                             也能返到500年前,
                                                                                                商贾云集的繁华。
                                                                                                       渺然,
                                                                                 车水马龙,人流穿梭,舟楫穿涌,
                                                                                            这里曾经的繁荣。
                                                                                                       而今,
                                                                                                   清风古月。
                                                                                                     只剩,
                                                                                          “踏歌古岸”古匾。
                                                                                           李白早已驾鹤仙去
                                                                                                       而今
                                                                                           人也鬓如霜白
                                                                                                    惨淡生还。
                                                                                                 日薄西山下,
                                                                                                       只有,
                                                                                                   猫儿凝视,
                                                                                                   飘落古籍,
                                                                                                        只有,
                                                                                                   老人幽情,
                                                                                                     卵石古景。
                                                                                                  几朵花儿照旧开,
                                                                                                         她在问?
                                                                                                       今天的败,
                                                                                                       谁弄的?
                                                                                                 那年那月的哀,
                                                                                                        谁的责?
                                                                                                  那朝那代的该。
                                                                                                       问苍天?
                                                                                                     谁主沉浮。
                                                                                                      问大地?
                                                                                                     谁的过错。
                                                                                                     高山流水,
                                                                                                 历史就这样过。
                                                                                                  可我还在爱。
                                                                                                       (二)

                                                                                                           

                                                                                                       铁手啊,
                                                                                                      无梦徽州,
                                                                                                    真不敢入梦,
                                                                                                 入了梦恐怖今生。
                                                                                                       僵尸村,
                                                                                                     栋栋陋室,
                                                                                                    哭叫哀鸣。
                                                                                             清风凄凉的景致,
                                                                                                    诉说着,
                                                                                                 衰败的碎片,
                                                                                               撒遍小石鹅卵。
                                                                                                     推门,
                                                                                              没有孩童跃雀,
                                                                                                老人无奈是确。
                                                                                                         只有,
                                                                                                   夕阳余晖下,
                                                                                                  青石路板,
                                                                                                      昭示,
                                                                                               曾经的忙碌,
                                                                                               曾经的角逐。
                                                                                                     看看,
                                                                                            辚次接彼的店铺,
                                                                                            已歇业几十年唔。
                                                                                                     瞧瞧,
                                                                                         四邻刮目相看的豪宅,
                                                                                         凋零风穿堂满地尘埃。
                                                                                                      今天,
                                                                                              真是点点红花,
                                                                                                     掩不住,
                                                                                                猫的泣簖,
                                                                                                老人哀怨。
                                                                                            铁手涮涮走过,
                                                                                                  仿佛,
                                                                                                鬼影再现,
                                                                                          此地在不敢露面。
                                                                 铁手给俺诗的评论
      
          非常感谢情感老师用热情的诗词鼓励在下,还是做了两首,俺要感谢两回,老师的QQ我是凌晨四点去拜访的,其它时间网速太慢,谢谢情感老师!问好! ^_^
         
 
 

                                                     无梦徽州——逝去的繁华[原创]
                                                                                        作者:铁手
     这里过去都曾是繁华商埠,水陆通衢的要道。

那条走向水边的石板路上至今仍有石碑刻着“官道”二字。从现在的破败无法想象当年的繁华……


“李白乘舟将欲行,忽闻岸上踏歌声。桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦送我情。”李白早已驾鹤仙去,只剩下“踏歌古岸”一块破匾陪伴清风苦月。

据老人们介绍:从一、两百年前开始直到上个世纪五、六十年代这里都是繁华热闹的很,一条青弋江是出入泾县直达芜湖的主要通道。青石板路两旁的店铺是辚次接彼,一家挨着一家。四乡八邻的乡亲都是到这里来买东西、赶集、从这里经水路上徽州府、杭州府、苏州府……

如今有了公路,青弋江的上游又建了水坝,这里的水运交通就日见衰败,河道是卵石裸露,杂草丛生。青石板路两旁曾经云集的商家也纷纷关门歇业,一条老街的房子居然有一大半是无人居住、屋顶透光、门窗腐烂,瞧着就感觉是摇摇欲坠……


年青人都出去打工创业,许多人在外面挣了钱,就再也不愿意回到这里生活,他们向往着大城市的生活,再不济也是要到泾县县城买房子。


留下看守着青石板路,看守着家里老宅的都是些老人。他们依旧沿袭着过去的生活方式,点上煤炉做饭,去河边洗菜洗衣服……


他们的生活如同深秋中的枯草,膝下无儿孙环绕,老猫与时钟是他们生活中的伴侣,来个外人他们都要警觉的打量着你



过去曾经令四邻刮目相看的豪宅,如今再也无力维护修缮……

在这里,曾经辉煌的徽州文化、徽州民居明显已经日渐衰败,日薄西山……



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回复 放飞情感 2011-11-28 09:06
To: 鐡手 你曾经说:
到情感老师家里当面来致谢了,老师创作激情让我感动,一来就是两首。在下感谢之余应该更勤奋努力。问好情感老师! ^_^
老弟谢谢你了这样谦虚,想中文网人品好的人真多啊。
是你的图片好,能让人身历其境,看了感同身受,就不得不写,不写不行,一定写。要把图片的情景用文笔浏览出来。管它文笔拙不拙,先倒出来挨骂也不怕,反正都出去,伪不伪劣,那是质监局的事了,与我无关了。哈哈哈哈
回复 鐡手 2011-11-28 08:25
到情感老师家里当面来致谢了,老师创作激情让我感动,一来就是两首。在下感谢之余应该更勤奋努力。问好情感老师! ^_^

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